My fellow comrades

Nice book interesting chapter about kingdom of aeloria. And the royal family was betrayed.More interest about the crown who is the main and prince

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Nice work author . Captivating synopsis!

This story was so skibidi weird I gooned(I in fact did not read single sentence in it😜)

High quality of writing compared to other series here in WN. If you want to read, stop questioning this and that to follow how our world (or to be exact how your place do things. We have countries in this world and each country operates differently). Besides, it is normal to see stupid or clumsy actions from the MC as he is developing as a character progressively. He is smart but not smart in everything as he is learning. Anyways, worth reading!

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